At Times

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Putting you away

Doesn’t hurt as much as

Remaining close does.

The emptiness we hide. You know it, right?

At times I feel

You and I are one

At times I feel

I and You are none

At times I feel

An inseparable distance between us

At times I feel

It’s the closeness that hurts.

And

The emptiness we hide. You know it, right?

But

At times. It happens, though, its actually all right. It might actually be. One never knows.

Sun will rise/ clouds will hide/ Sun will shine/ Brighter all the while/ Light always finds/ Fight it fights/ Darkness its own/ A little less light / Little darker/ Or just/ Less brighter?

💌

32 Comments Add yours

    1. Ayush says:

      Thank you 🤓☄️

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      1. Filarance says:

        You’re welcome..!

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  1. So poignant and ❤️

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  2. Tanusri sen says:

    For some people, it is reality. Beautiful, deep and sad poem…

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    1. Ayush says:

      Yeah.
      Thank you😊

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  3. garima07 says:

    Awwwwwweeeeeessssssssooooooommmmmmmeee

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    1. Ayush says:

      Thaaaaannnnkkkkkkuuuuuu😂❤️

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  4. Its relatable, happens many times… a litter distance provides good opportunity to analyze.

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    1. Ayush says:

      Yeah and it truly hurts like hell. Anyway thanks for stopping by😊✌️

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  5. Woah! This is relatable. Sometimes closeness hurts way more than distance. Beautifully written. 😞 And that messy thing in the end, that is the real star huh. That’s raw poetry. I like it. ❤

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    1. Ayush says:

      Dhanyawaad😛
      It happens with normal beings😹

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      1. Oye! I’m also normal person only. 😾

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      2. Ayush says:

        Umm assume kar sakte hai😹

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      3. Assume nahi believe karo ye baat. 😒😒😒

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      4. Ayush says:

        Theeeeek😂😂

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      5. Without laughing like a monster. 🙅

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      6. Ayush says:

        Okay😭✌️

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  6. Sadia Noor says:

    I like you tagline! 😉

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  7. DuaSiddiqui 💫 says:

    https://wp.me/paTmYz-8g
    I’ve nominated you for mystery Blogger Award

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    1. Ayush says:

      Thankuuu😇

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  8. Ramyani Bhattacharya says:

    Very painful but beautiful. This happens all the time. We always try to hide the emptiness in the relationships we have 🙂

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    1. Ayush says:

      Thanks😊
      (And sometimes it kills the relationship)

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      1. Ramyani Bhattacharya says:

        I think it’s better to end the relation than keeping a hollow one. It just becomes fake with each day 🙂

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      2. Ayush says:

        Umm maybe😔

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      3. Ramyani Bhattacharya says:

        I can understand the pain but I would say that much better things are waiting ahead so keeping faith is the only option 🙂

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      4. Ayush says:

        Yeah😊✌️

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  9. Mukul says:

    Beautiful!!❤️

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    1. Ayush says:

      Thank you! 😊

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