A New Sun


My hands become numb
And my fingers freeze
When I think about you.
But oh darling
It’s a new sun
And I shall like for you
To realize my realization.
Now I wouldn’t heed
The veil of my soul
Darkened ashes all and whole.
So Let me sway
And burn away
The shroud on it whole.
It’s a new sun
And I shall like for me
To set the chains you heaped upon me
Free.
So,
Here you go
I set you free.
Because it’s a new sun
And guess what?
I am
The beaming one!


Take care,

โฃ๏ธ

23 Comments Add yours

  1. Woohoo! What an encouraging and empowering poem, Ayush! ๐Ÿ˜บ Loved the rhymes the imagery and the feel. This is what I want to see more on your blog. ๐Ÿ˜ผ
    Also, you lost the challenge, boy. ๐Ÿฅณ Loser loser loserrrr!

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    1. Ayush says:

      Uh wrote this one in January or February i don’t remember, when i realized I’m actually struggling bcuz i don’t want anything to express. Still continues. uninstalled everything. Will be back soon maybe. (Recent posts were all purane.) Just completed the 27th book of this year hehe so proud I’m of me. Goal was 30. Maybe I’ll leave reading and try to write. Will be back then. Aap post karo warna loan leke bhai ko dena pad jaega๐Ÿ˜‚

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      1. Arey re! Cheaterrrr. Firefly ko bevkoof bana diya haan. Is baat ki maafi nahi milegi. ๐Ÿ˜พ
        Anddd worst case of writer’s block has caught you. And also teenage wale naatak. ๐Ÿ˜’ I used to be the same when I was 19. But na ek baat suno, sab uninstall karke bhi shaanti nahi milti hai. ๐Ÿ˜‚ Shaanti is a mental thing. External cheez pe nahi depend karta kuch.
        Wow, 27 books! Send me the list huh, I’ll also read. ๐Ÿ˜บ Maine toh 7 books hi complete ki is saal.
        Mere sar pe kaafi loan hai abi hi. Atleast 50-60โ‚น toh ho hi gaya. Tum jaao mat na. Stay here and suffer with me. ๐Ÿ˜พ

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      2. Ayush says:

        Maine hi likhe to cheater kyu๐Ÿ™„Natak nahi + I’m 18 + kuch chize hatane se dimag me Garbage kam jata hai + mujhe bhi 10-20k dena tha + Perumal Murugan ke buks- Poonachi/Pyre padhiega!!

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      3. Abi recently nahi likhe na. That’s cheating. ๐Ÿ™„ + 18+ whatever huh, doesn’t mean you’ll ignore blogging ๐Ÿ˜ผ + I agree, Instagram hata diya kya wapas? + Mujhe doge 10-20k? ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Dedo I won’t mind + Ooo bhyi, ye kaunsi language ke books hain? + YOU’RE NOT LEAVING. ๐Ÿ˜’

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      4. Ayush says:

        ๐Ÿ˜‘Insta kaafi months baad activate kie recently and everything else uninstalled. English translations hi hai+ Idk.

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      5. I don’t know too. Tum idhar rahoge bas. Abi gaye na fir don’t talk to me baad mein. ๐Ÿ™„

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      6. Ayush says:

        Arre๐Ÿ™„ I’ll remain here but not sure if I’ll post๐Ÿ™„

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      7. Meko kidhar se pata chalega you’re here or not. ๐Ÿ™„ Cheater ho ekdum. ๐Ÿ™„ Huh. ๐Ÿ™„

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      8. Ayush says:

        Post karte rhie hum pdhenge na๐Ÿ˜‚

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      9. Mai nai karrahi ab. Ayushshsh ne sab bigaad diya. ๐Ÿ˜’

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      10. Ayush says:

        Maine kuch nahi kiya๐Ÿ˜ถ

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      11. Chori karke bolte ho mai chor nahi huuu. ๐Ÿ˜’
        By the way, chess khelne aata hai? ๐Ÿ˜ผ

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      12. Ayush says:

        Thoda thoda. Kyun?

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      13. Mai blog likhne wali uspe. Youtube mein dekhna, ‘ghoda is a respectable animal’ kaafi trending hai abi. ๐Ÿคฃ

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      14. Good morning huh. ๐Ÿ˜ผ

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      15. Ayush says:

        Hein?๐Ÿ™„Good evening XD

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      16. ๐Ÿ˜พ Good night.

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      17. Ayush says:

        ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ’ซ

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      18. Gaye nahi ho haan. Firefly se darr gaye. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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      19. Ayush says:

        Assume kar lijie aisa๐Ÿคฃ

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      20. Ye hui na baat. Good boy. โ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ˜ผ

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